I personally don't find the song bad, just the fact that GarageBand and SoundTrap is not really appropriate to the epitome of music that is generally posted to this website. I recommend cutting sounds out of the loops and using them rather than just using the whole loop itself
I can very well understand why other people like this song. Although I'm not too much of a fan. The melody is repetitive throughout the entire song. Of course it's a decent melody. But come on, at least add something into the mix. I like the feel of the video game style, it's not a bad song in general. I would just prefer a bit more melody and sound. So in your next track, try to focus on the melody and sound rather than adding instruments to make it more upbeat.
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